Complete and Utter Chaos

Alarms Blared as smoke curled through the cracked ceiling tiles, as Ravi stumbled over fallen chairs and scattered papers. The lab was chaos – monitors flashed red, beakers shattered, liquid hissing as it met the floor. Someone screamed, but it was downed by the shrill vail of the evacuation alert. Ravi’s hand shook as he fumbled with the override panel – 3 minutes before full system breakdown. Sparks flew from the main monitor. Behind him, a cabinet burst into flames. His earpiece crackled with static. ” abort !!! get out!!!” shouted a distance voice, but he could not leave, not without stopping the reaction. Sweat dripped into his eyes. One wrong wire and everything would be over. He took a breath, swallowed his fear, and dove into the tangle of circuits.

His fingers moved by instincts now, dancing over wires and fuses, the way a pianist finds notes in chaos. The heat was unbearable – his lab coat clung to his back, his breath shallow in the smoky air. A pipe hissed above and then burst, sending a jet of steam inches away from his head. He didn’t flinch. One last connection. One final code. The panel blinked, hesitated, then turned green. The alarms silenced. He had done it – barely.

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  1. Shivani Avatar

    Very well written!

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  2. SR Avatar

    enjoyed your first post, quite the nail biter, I’m ready for what happens next:) keep writing. SR

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    1. Subir Avatar

      Brilliant Sukrant. Keep it up!

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  3. abhimanyumonga07 Avatar

    good work Sukrant …extremely gripping…eagerly waiting for the next one!!!

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  4. Anirudh Monga Avatar

    Wow, I felt like I was right there in the lab with Ravi! The part where you compared his hands to a pianist finding notes in the chaos was such a cool image. You really nailed the ‘ticking clock’ tension—I was holding my breath until that panel turned green. Can’t wait to see what happens to Ravi next!

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  5. Megha Sahgal Avatar

    What a fabulous read! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

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  6. Pradip Kumar Avatar

    Awesome n enjoyed your first post, our SUPER STAR , we all are eagerly waiting for the next one!!!May God Shower his blessings on you to achieve your goals 🎉🎉

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  7. Shyam Lohana Avatar

    Brilliantly written, you have excellent storytelling skills. A gripping thriller with a compelling plot. Keep them coming! 🙌🏼

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  8. Pradip Kumar sehgal Avatar

    Awesome n enjoyed your first post, our SUPER STAR , we all are eagerly waiting for the next one!!!May God Shower his blessings on you to achieve your goals 🎉🎉

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  9. Himanshu Avatar

    Great job Sukant… it’s nail biting from the first line to the last word – “barely’. Keep it up. Would love yo see a different emotion captured in your next blog.

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  10. Harleen Sethi Avatar

    This is so well put. Waiting for more!!

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  11. casuallypurple31a8dcf4b9 Avatar

    This is so well written. Waiting for more!

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  12. sukrantmonga Avatar

    this is very well written

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  13. Shipra Bhalla Chowdhary Avatar

    Such wonderful and immersive writing! In a world of nonsensical abbreviations , these words.. strung carefully feel so wholesome! Keep going Sukrant… can’t wait to read more !!

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  14. R RAJAGOPALAN Avatar

    Very well written Sukrant . Good beginning . Looked like a climax scene out of Matt Damon s Bourne Series movies . Well written . Keep writing on other less glamorous subjects also . That is the only way to improve . Keep it up .
    R Rajagopalan

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